These names are an automatic turnoff to the reader, because extremely out-of-the-ordinary names are a dead-giveaway of a Mary Sue (kind of ironic, isn't it? But don't just say once Clearly, I have read far too many pieces of bad fanfiction.Though, sadly enough, this is often how you see James or Sirius described (but that is another thing all together).Harry is skinny and pale with glasses; Ron is lanky, pale, and freckled, with bright red hair and too-short robes; Neville is rounder and thicker, with big teeth; the twins are shorter and stocky; Peter (who WAS NOT ALL BAD AT FIRST, though again, that's another story), has small watery eyes and pointed features, Snape has greasy hair and a hook nose.
To help him try to remember, he is hired at Hogwarts&tasked by the Order to protect Harry&help stop Voldemort. What motivates you? The joy of their growing family is tempered by the return of enemies from the past and Harry's continued trek down the prophecy's path. Voldemort MOST DEFINITELY has no siblings (seeing as he killed his father and his mother died in childbirth) and he has no children, since the whole point of his character is that he is unable to love (or feel anything really, which I'm sure put a damper on the idea of sex). Bill is described as 'cool,' though he has hair long enough to be put into a ponytail and eventually has his looks destroyed by Fenrir Greyback. Think about it. Snape does not have a daughter, you know, 'cause he only ever loved Lily and all that, and they certainly had no children together. As Nikolai comes to terms with the fact that he is in love with Viktor, it seems like Viktor is growing more and more fond of Hogwarts student Hermione Granger. That doesn't mean the OC has to be paired with anyone, all HP OC fics welcome.Ginny is sorted into Slytherin. End of story.Most boys at that age are still growing, so they are in an awkward, skinny phase for the most part. If you've created a 'Might is Right' activist, they are not going to be buddy-buddy with Lily or Hermione. Good choices include Carla, Rebecca, Beth, Kara, Annette, Ella, Sophie, Sarah, Jill, Haley, Kayla (truly! Luna. Creating An OC: Harry Potter [Part Two] * * * So, as I said before, this is going to be where I talk to you guys about wands. Slightly sarcastic at times, no offence meant. Meanwhile, Ron and Hermione must help Harry's Muggle counterpart pass himself off as the real Boy Who Lived. Maybe they are a Harry and Ron situation—coming from different backgrounds but brought together because they had no one else. In Harry Potter Fanfiction, there are many OCs, and quite a few of them are excellent. Disabled OCs. At least I don't have a psychopath out for my head. She never liked Severus, since she grew up being taught that Slytherins were no good, but she put up with him for Lily's sake.Krista joined the Gryffindor Quidditch team in her third year as the reserve Keeper, the same year that James became Chaser. But things aren't always what they seem.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,938 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 7 - Published: Harry Potter was killed at Hogwarts during the battle at the end of 7th year, leaving the wizarding world in chaos. Your review has been posted. For boys, you're most likely looking at James, Sirius (try to only use constellations if you're creating a new Black relative), Remus, Peter, Frank, Edgar, Benjy, Caradoc, Harry, Ron, Neville, Fred, George, Dean, Seamus, Michael, Colin, Justin, Anthony, Lee, and Ernie. Neville. Or maybe they are Ron and Hermione and it takes battling a mountain troll for them to be on civil terms. Includes name, appearance, background, personality, and examples. She is the one described above as beautiful, perfect, etc. Rated T for violence&suggestive themes (Slash Pairings in future chapters)Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 27 - Words: 103,313 - Reviews: 62 - Favs: 34 - Follows: 42 - Updated: ... (When creating your OC's back story, consider what era they are currently in. Begins the summer before GoF and follows canon timeline.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 46 - Words: 314,773 - Reviews: 157 - Favs: 109 - Follows: 92 - Updated: The arrival of Catherine's daughter's Hogwarts letter brings up a slew of memories Catherine thought were long buried.